Saw you walking barefoot
taking a long look
at the new moon's eyelid
later spread
sleep-fallen, naked in your dark hair
asleep but not oblivious
of the unslept unsleeping
elsewhere
Tonight I think
no poetry
will serve
Syntax of rendition:
verb pilots the plane
adverb modifies action
verb force-feeds noun
submerges the subject
noun is choking
verb disgraced goes on doing
now diagram the sentence
2011
Regular
Confessionalism
2023
Ars Poetica
Love & Relationships
Imagery
visually descriptive or figurative language, especially in a literary work
Neologism
a new word, serious or humorous, coined by a writer.
Personification
the attribution of human qualities to a non-human thing