This is a poem with missing details,
of ground gouging each barrack's windowpane,
sand crystals falling with powder and shale,
where silence and shame make adults insane.
This is about a midnight of searchlights,
of ground gouging each barrack's windowpane,
of syrup on rice and a cook's big fight.
This is the night of Manzanar's riot.
This is about a midnight of searchlights,
a swift moon and a voice shouting, Quiet!
where the revolving searchlight is the moon.
This is the night of Manzanar's riot,
windstorm of people, rifle powder fumes,
children wiping their eyes clean of debris,
where the revolving searchlight is the moon,
and children line still to use the latrines.
This is a poem with missing details,
children wiping their eyes clean of debris—
sand crystals falling with powder and shale.
2008
Regular
Contemporary
2023
Poetic Form
Violence & War
Imagery
visually descriptive or figurative language, especially in a literary work
Metaphor
a comparison between two unrelated things through a shared characteristic
Rhyme
correspondence of sound between words or the endings of words, especially when these are used at the ends of lines of poetry
Tercet
A stanza of three lines of verse that rhyme together or are connected by rhyme with an adjacent stanza.
Terza rima
a poem, Italian in origin, composed of tercets woven into a complex rhyme scheme
Villanelle
a nineteen-line poem with two rhymes throughout, consisting of five tercets and a quatrain, with the first and third lines of the opening tercet recurring alternately at the end of the other tercets and with both repeated at the close of the concluding quatrain