My friend is going through the fire on his knees,
His hands, crossing the entire field of it;
Once in a while he calls out, bewildered,
The other side unclear, wanting to just
Lie down and wait among the scattered stones.
Unimaginable heat: he pants, lost in the light
Of what keeps happening–think water, think water,
And he manages to make out one nurse
Up against the bright and it takes everything
To tell her what he needs, as if he had come upon
The one tree still standing, and understood
She promises nothing, who in her uniform
Was all that was ever asked for and who
Could hold him as he has never been held.
2006
Regular
Contemporary
Health & Illness
Alliteration
the repetition of the same letter or sound at the beginning of words appearing in succession
Extended Metaphor
a metaphor that extends through several lines or even an entire poem
Repetition
a recurrence of the same word or phrase two or more times
Simile
a comparison between two unlike things using the words “like” or “as”
Varied syntax
diverse sentence structure